Pre-writing

Pre-writing


A 62 years old man named Leroy Strachan has been arrested.

The crime that took place 45 years ago.

Officer John Milledge was killed.

Procecutors are unlikely to seek in this case.

The death penalty.

what is the best justice?

The law is impartial for everyone.

Everybody must to pay their mistakes.

Strachan is a good person.

Difficult situation.

I remembered "Cold Case" serie

How he could live with that "Karma"





Reflection:

The purpose of pre-writing is getting concrete details down on paper before organizing a new piece into paragraphs. When I read the story about Strachan, I enjoyed a lot, because I had to think deeply and I learned to found the most important ideas for the essay. That wasn't difficult at the beginning but at the end I had to use them to complete my draft, I need good ideas.